Letter to Mr Mah Bow Tan

Dear Mr Mah Bow Tan,



Feedback on Playground in Tampines







I am Liew Yu Wei from Pasir Ris Secondary School. I am writing on behalf of my group consisting of Elroy Ng, Ryan Chew, Goh Chin Yong and Fathullah on how to improve on the playgrounds in Tampines.



After some time, we have created a playground that is suitable for children with non-contagious and terminal diseases. Firstly, our playground consists of bright and colorful walls so that these children can feel that there is still hope for them. Secondly, the playground is quite safe as there are lots of cushion balls on the floor. Why not just cushion? Cushion balls are quite well-liked by kids, so cushion balls are to ensure that kids could have really lots of fun. Thirdly, there is a simple maze in the playground with some obstacles which represents one must be able to overcome anything in order to succeed. Fourthly, the playground is build like a castle so as to improve on the third point(able to overcome obstacles so as to ‘conquer’ the castle). This playground should be built indoor. It shall be also the first indoor playground in Tampines.



We came up with this project as we feel that the playgrounds in the neighborhood are a bit outdated and the facilities are inefficient. Firstly, there are lots of cracks which could hurt children. Secondly, colors are dull and paints are dropping off which makes the playground to look unattractive and boring.



Once our playground is build, the colors shall attract kids, the maze shall be educational and most importantly, it gives hope to children with non-contagious and terminal disease.



We hope that you would accept these feedbacks so as to improve the playgrounds in Tampines. Thank You for reading.

Yours sincerely,
Liew Yu Wei